too cold to snow
she won’t return
my call
posted by extraspecialbitter at 1:54 PM
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3 Comments:
factually, it can't be 'too cold to snow' . . . but poetically it conveys the sentiment precisely. well done.
but it could be too cold to rain...
Still, very nice
eric - ironically, I'm usually a stickler for such literal disconnects. in this case, however, I was readily seduced by a figure of speech.
ricardas - thank you as always for visiting and commenting.
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