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    the haiku blog of paul david mena

    Wednesday, December 29, 2004


    Mary took this photo about two years ago when we were compiling material for "Subway Serenade", but I’ve never managed to write a haiku worthy of it.

    Here’s one—only vaguely related—dating back to 1997:

    an artist’s bedroom —
    four bare walls
    and a broken light

     

    Monday, December 27, 2004


    winter storm —
    nobody wants to walk
    last year's Christmas present

     

    Wednesday, December 22, 2004


    winter solstice —
    an ex-girlfriend’s name
    tattooed to his neck

     

    Monday, December 20, 2004


    sunset
    the smokestacks
    darken

     

    Sunday, December 19, 2004


    Park Street station —
    the B train saves me
    from a subway preacher

     

    Friday, December 10, 2004


    bent forward
    from the heavy snow —
    my aching back

     

    Thursday, December 09, 2004


    winter dreariness —
    I can't bear
    to look at the moon

     

    Sunday, December 05, 2004


    raking leaves —
    all the apologies
    I've never made


    Admittedly, the image and haiku have nothing to do with one another. ¡qué lastima!

    I've always viewed raking leaves as an acquiescence of sorts—acknowledging that Fall is over and that Winter is inevitable. The harshness of the December wind brings with it an urgency to complete the chore. The task is physically intense, forcing the mind to wander.

    The original version of this haiku was somewhat more sinister:

    raking leaves —
    all the apologies
    I'll never make


    Once back inside, my perspective softened. Soon I'll view the snow as beautiful and quaint—in a New England sort of way—until I have to break out the shovel...